Banished

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

the novel has a nice storyline but there's need for improvement in the writing quality

New original perspective on the rebirth genre that is fun to read. The descriptions in the combat scenes were quite thrilling while the characters communication could usesome refinement. A solid read for people looking for thrill with a new take on a familiar theme.

It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older

his body and stood behind the head of the village, not blocking him and

In a world like this, kids are mindless about it. Yet they make it look better. They make it their own. The only hero in this city, the only king to lead a kingdom, the person they dreamt to be.

Lei Yun looked at her and said with a grin, "Beauty do you to be with this man here?"